Drink Consumes all

A Man Went In

A Boy Came Out

Mentally Altered

Changed Beyond A Doubt

His Face Once Strong

Now Hides With A Shout

For The Drink Consumes All

And Few It Spits Back Out

Memories Shattered

Friends Begone

Harshened Melodies

Ever Lasting Dawns

In Dangers Face

The Boy Quickly Pales

In The Dim Little Room

Where He Downs His Ale

Reviews

[Cat]

Cool! Fun! Enjoyable! Good!

[julia senpai]

i fell in love with this i was reading some of your stuff im so in love with them

[Shadows Ember]

I really like this. It gives the reader a sense of what it is like to be that person. Good format, it flows nicely though every word being capitalized is a bit distracting. Other than that I think it is lovely.

[Sectando]

This poem makes me thirsty. More wine!

[Brittany]

loved it so much:) i really injoy reading your work and hope to hear more:)

[Perfect Mistake]

Very wonderful read. Alcohol can be a real b***h sometimes especially when alters one's personality, anywho great job.

[Ink Seductress]

Excellent write. It was alluring and haunting all at once, but the message reached out and gripped on to me. It was surreal! I look forward to reading more of your work.

[misha]

This is wonderful. Such an honest view on how alcohol can change a person. It can show who we truly are underneath, from the shell of a man to the flesh of a boy. Great write!

[I Am Svetlana]

Hm, interesting write here! And it's true, alcohol does change people, both mentally and physically. Scary, but too true. I know some close friends of mine who happen to be alcoholics, some who used to be and have turned past it to get a new and better grip on themselves. Me, I fancy a drink every now and again, but it doesn't 'own me' how it would own some. Drinking has its benefits, but like everything else around us, it happens to have its certain limitations about it also that we must consider. Great write with a powerful message!

[Sami Khalil]

I like the poem, format and the message...Bravo.............