Blue Flame

"Not really alone, lots of scum bags were around. Scum bags don't count as real people though, so Will and Ellen were alone.
AND
"That would be dubbed the dirty corner, and he shall never walk there again."

are some of the best lines in anything I've read. Ever.
I love the idea, though the font seems a tad bit small. You have successfully rocked the Science Fiction category in my opinion. As long as you continue to write this, I will definitely read it. Mainly because you had me hooked from the first few sentences, and until the very end. I was very interested in what they do.

From the very beginning you distinctly outlined each character's personality, it was great how it wasn't flat out, boring descriptions, but their actions really defined them. I really want to know what happens next because the whole plot, characters and subtle humour interest me. Keep it up for sure!

Posted 12 Years Ago

"Not really alone, lots of scum bags were around. Scum bags don't count as real people though, so Will and Ellen were alone.
AND
"That would be dubbed the dirty corner, and he shall never walk there again."

are some of the best lines in anything I've read. Ever.
I love the idea, though the font seems a tad bit small. You have successfully rocked the Science Fiction category in my opinion. As long as you continue to write this, I will definitely read it. Mainly because you had me hooked from the first few sentences, and until the very end. I was very interested in what they do.

From the very beginning you distinctly outlined each character's personality, it was great how it wasn't flat out, boring descriptions, but their actions really defined them. I really want to know what happens next because the whole plot, characters and subtle humour interest me. Keep it up for sure!

Posted 12 Years Ago

:D That was really cool :D Your write excellently. ^-^

Posted 12 Years Ago