Frozen Dream

Hidden deep in the subconscious

I'm walking around

Can't get out

It's like I'm locked inside the dream

Inception

Like it's frozen

There's no way out

I'm stuck in a dream that won't move backward or forward

Running to get somewhere

It's no use

I'm running in every direction and still end up in the same place

Stuck in time

Getting nowhere

There's someone there, but the person is helpless

She is looking for a way out, too

We tried to scream

But no sound came out

Instead, we screamed in silence

Stupid silent screams

No one can hear us

It's just us two

Searching frantically to get out

Out of breath from all the running

Time stopped

It won't move

Locked

Locked in a frozen dream

With no way out

Reviews

[Lyan]

Really enjoyed reading the poem. You can feel all the emotions that are presented in the poem and that is a wonderful thing.The poem kinda made me think of the Maze Runner. I'm not entirely sure why.

[Namrata]

Frustration and hopelessness, all go through it. Now when you have another being doing the same silent scream, take a deep breath and help each other out.
I don't know, of late, I have been full of positive energy and can't bear to let people think negative. I hope I help, not frustrate further.

[Tricia Pattinson]

I finished with a sense of hopelessness. Like the effort to find one's way on a moonless night but much more frustrating. Enjoyed reading.