Beautiful Soul

Just humans contemplating life.

Beautiful you

Beautiful soul

Beautiful life

From there to here

We travelled

Unknowing where to go 

But

Written with clarity

A sun's warmth

A moonlight's kiss

Lover's cuddle

The sun's light written on paper

A midsummer night's dream

Those delicious dreams

Yearning to take you away

Let life take you away

This beautiful life

Nothing but a dream

Travel further

So much more to discover

Rain falling on the ground

The world is crying

Travel from there to here

While you still got it

A flower's bloom

The sun's light

Don't let it slip through your fingertips

Beautiful life

The world is mine. 

Reviews

[Lyan]

This poem makes me think of how more aware we should be of our surroundings and actually take the time to notice what is around; smell the flowers, lay on the grass, stare at the sky full of stars, etc.

[Namrata]

Seasonal imagery is quite restless in this poem....a very quick and carefree pen down. Enjoyable read ! And from the partial praise of nature's beauty ..I can safely say it is just a human who is contemplating. A greater soul strives for greater contemplation.

[Tricia Pattinson]

Experiencing the World as expressed in this poem is quite lovely. Enjoyed the view!

[Matthew Bosko]

I love how it captures the essence of being with someone you really care about. When you are with that person it's almost like it is a fairy tale, almost like you need a reminder, or evidence that it really exists.
I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading your future work.