First Steps

Never give up and always do your best.

First Steps

 

To take your first steps,

You have to try hard.

It is certain you will fall,

But you have to choose to get back up.

Don’t get sad if it takes awhile.

Some may take their first steps before you,

Others may not.

Everyone is different.

Just remember,

Never give up.

Always learn to take your first steps.

 

Reviews

[Jason Galliger]

This poem is pretty decent. Like the review below I'd also like to see you spice up your word choice a little bit, perhaps put in a metaphor or some imagery. This really adds depth to your work and helps to convey your emotions and meaning better. And welcome!

[Paris France]

A cute poem, a good reaminder to always persevere in life. I think you could spice up your word choice, but all in all good work.
Keep it up! God bless : )