Hawaiian Fantasy in Blue

A glimpse of paradise

Hawaiian Fantasy in Blue
By: J. A. Stevens

Where the sea meets the sky,
Blue on blue.
White sails, slowly sliding by,
Azure hue.
Warm sands, intense, bright sun,
Calming you.
Beautiful island girl, scantily clad,
No taboo.
House made of grass and leaves,
And bamboo.
Waves of heat blurring the beach,
Outrigger canoe.
Shiny, silver grey dolphin rises,
Blowhole spew.
Hammock swaying in the balmy breeze,
Troubles few.
To the urban squalor and urban filth,
You bid adieu.
Tropical paradise and tropical peace,
Who needs a shoe?

(20 lines)

© Copyright 2012 J.A. Stevens

Reviews

[revalatia]

Nice!... I wanna go!!! :P

[SyberRose]

I liked that last line...I lived in Hawaii...so true...and my daughter still lives there, nice form...I enjoyed...SyberRose

[Stormie Sky]

This is great, I like this a lot. Great job writing this.

[poeticbreeze]

Nice poem :D

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Very nice, J.A.! I like this style of poetry; terse, full of imagery and great connectives. Good work. :)