Subtle Attempt

Subtle Attempt

A Poem by JMS
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something I felt while being superior. You would recognize it if you ever felt that way.

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 The best

At what I was the best

At was a result of

my being well versed

and acquainted with let downs

which was a part of constantly being let down

it is the joy of finding a burst pen in the laundry

success is, I mean.

© 2009 JMS


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this is wonderful, i read it about 10 times.

Posted 14 Years Ago


haha i like this...the last part is quite unexpected, which makes it all the better i think...great

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on November 30, 2009

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