Sur L'amour

Sur l’amour

God said�"

I will write for you, a sky,

that wakes each day to tell you, it is okay

to fall            asleep.

I will plant for you, a tree, so that you can rest in the shade,

But always return to the sun.

I will grow for you, blackberries,

as you will learn each this-and-that has two jobs:

to feed, and,

to stain.

I will give you choice,

to              free,

and laughter,

to hold.

But, first, I will give to you

Love.

Maybe in a person, maybe in a mountain,

could be in a flute, perpetually fleeting,

I will give you no map,

For it is solely up to you to find where I have

buried your dosage,

and why I have given you this first,

expansively, and

  above

All      else

Author's Note

feedback appreciated (:

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, poetry at its finest. I love how words cascade off the page to convey your expressions. Nicely done.

[$werve]

Beautiful

[B]

You write so beautifully
please never stop
there is a fine voice to your words
Something very unique
and your message here
is gold

bravo

[Relic]

This is a poem that is finely written and thought out.

Nice work. :)