Perfect dreams

Perfect dreams

A Poem by john
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A poem

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Perfect dreams

perfect means

teams of men being laid to slaughter

for ulterior motives and schemes.

 

Dreams of crazy people

who mean only to harm,

sucking dreams like a mosquito

sucks an arm.

© 2012 john


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I love the rhyme and the message that I got from this is that even though one is justified to have dreams, it is wrong for him/her to be so obsessed as to trample on other's or harm them in the process. A good reminder.

Posted 12 Years Ago


great write !...well done

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Austin, TX



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