Forget it

A poem

Memory knows it happened,
Pride will not let it enter the mind

Push it out of your own conscience,
Did you truly find peace of mind?

Dig your head in the sand
go inside your rabbits hole,
but you will never find
what makes somebody whole.

Reviews

[Tasha]

I love your play on words. This was very creative. Great write.

[Suavis_Umbra]

I love how you played with the words at the end of your poem."go inside your rabbits hole,
but you will never find
what makes somebody whole. " to me it seems as if whoever thinks that he/she is whole in fact only is narcisistic and it's just an act to cover a hole. I don't know if that's what you meant , maybe it wasn't , but it wasn't a mistake either. this is your artistic thoughts growing. AMAZING I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! XD XD

[john]

I meant in this poem that people like to hide trouble with a cover and some shallow people cannot see "what makes somebody whole". but good interpretation.

[Suavis_Umbra]

thanx , intepretation aside , amazing poem nevertheless.