Gulp

Dive into you

like water enters the

throat your muscles so

like those of the neck

a convulsive gulp

at climax, water,

becoming a part of

your system and

your soliloquies

something

you’ll remember

a convulsive

gulp my muscle

inside you becoming

you like water

leaves this

world.

Reviews

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Well again we diving into multiply ocean of possibilities and opinions. It's very abstractive but also very specific. We are became what we consume. Don't matter if you like or not. We are made mostly from water and probably we will became water or ashes in water. We absorb and we change or we just let pass through and make another pile of s..t. I like this metaphor here cause sound very innocent but at my brain is invoke so many creepy things. Well i guess that's my nature.

[JR]

Sex poem dude. Actually, started reading yours, and it got me thinking about oneness of sex... the act of being swallowed, joined. Totally honest, I was reading your s**t, and I was like... dude I totally remember this time when something like that happened to me... not stealing, just inspired. Dig your s**t the most, by the way. Just suck at leaving comments... serial reader, terrible reviewer. Big fan.

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I find sex poem always liberating from one self. Not all sexual experiences are pleasant. Some of my writing is not original neither . I make few poems on base of movies and books. Or just to listen to music. I think more crazy writing I wrote under influence of music By Mars Volta . Yes sometimes leaving comments can be more hard then write poem. But I realized here on this website people are too shy to comment on something if is not write from they circle of internet friends. By the way for today I prepared another poem about Henry Miller I think is like 30 poem what I make about him. So enjoy and feel free to be inspired again .