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A Poem by JR

They grow in cedar chips

like me, they start as pins and

then expand, up and out, full

flesh eating up the space that

used to be air, like me,

their heads full of dreams,

their bodies tight and

expectant like me,

they are waiting

to be eaten.

© 2020 JR


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I am not sure about this one what is actually means. Are you speaking about trees how they grow up the skies.
And you love so much Cedar fruits to make your tea and flavoring of your favorite meats. Maybe I am wrong but that's what I see it here. Let me know if I hitting on wrong tree.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JR

4 Years Ago

Mushrooms... my favorite type grows in cedar chips, along the coast.



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I am not sure about this one what is actually means. Are you speaking about trees how they grow up the skies.
And you love so much Cedar fruits to make your tea and flavoring of your favorite meats. Maybe I am wrong but that's what I see it here. Let me know if I hitting on wrong tree.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JR

4 Years Ago

Mushrooms... my favorite type grows in cedar chips, along the coast.

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