She Says

She says she’s broken but

I think if I can just wrap my arms

a little tighter around her I can

help her hold those pieces together

she says she’s broken but all I want

is her soft and warm beside me,

to share this shudder breath

she says she’s broken, she

says she’s broken but I still

somehow think if I can just

hold her tight enough I can

help her bring those pieces

together again.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

The speaker seems to be involved with someone who has sustained serious emotional damages.Despite her repetition that she is beyond help, there seems to be a determination to provide some kind of rescue. It is good to provide support to one in pain, but I wonder if the support is mutual here.
PS: Consider taking the s off besides and the er off the last tighter.

[JR]

Wondering the same thing... seems to be in my nature to try and fix things even when maybe that's a little beyond my abilities. Thanks on the edits, this came out in a rush and somewhat intoxicated and I see I need to polish it somewhat heh. Thanks John, great read.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Often things that are broken can be repaired. It depends on the time and love one is willing to invest in their reconstruction. I think if we care enough, almost anything is possible. I enjoyed.

[JR]

Thanks Fabian, appreciated the read. I agree, I think a lot of people don't realize how fixable they are. Time and love are the key components for sure.