Bitterness

Bitterness

A Poem by JR

The man blew in like sin
like a leaf teased by the wind
she was almost asleep, again
the man skittered in like
shoe leather scrapes a street
like summer cool and
winter heat he blew in
she was almost asleep, again
he blew in and shed
his clothes, laid down beside
her as a bag of bones
he blew in
she was almost asleep, again
he was warm beneath their
blanket of lies
but there was a bitterness
behind her eyes.

© 2020 JR


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Yes a person can only take so many lies
Love this poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JR

4 Years Ago

Thanks! I was challenged by a friend to write a poem based on the last line above... pretty pleased .. read more
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

4 Years Ago

No problem
Thanks

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