Angel Eyes

Angel Eyes

A Poem by J.P.O.et
"

The one that got away

"

She has angel eyes,

and a face that simply smiles

When she's smiling,

the angels light up in the skies

 

She can be demanding,

but she also is deserving

Cause she's a good girl

not too selfish or self-serving

 

Her kiss goodnight,

meant more to me than she will ever, ever know

And her hold me tight,

melted my heart more than I could ever show

 

When I dream I see her face

and it lights up my mind

But when I wake there's an empty space

cause she left me behind

 

A simple touch, her encouragement

could make me feel ten feet tall

A disgusted look, her disappointment

could make me feel oh so small

 

Her thoughts and opinions,

I'd listen and I'd learn

Cause she's of high intelligence,

that's not hard to discern

 

When I think of her, I smile

that is all that I can do

Cause she is much too beautifull

to make this boy feel blue

 

She has angel eyes,

and a face that simply smiles 

When she's smiling,

the angels light up in the skies

 

I can only hope that someday,

I can look into those angel eyes

Hold her close, hold her tight

I won't let go, cause damn time flies

© 2008 J.P.O.et


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'She can be demanding,but she also is deserving Cause she's a good girl not too selfish or self-serving'
Honest and pure. Betrays the innocence we almost recapture when we find someone we adore, someone who makes this world worth living. I really like this.



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A simple touch, her encouragement
could make me feel ten feet tall
A disgusted look, her disappointment
could make me feel oh so small

Priceless. I hope you shared this with her....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'She can be demanding,but she also is deserving Cause she's a good girl not too selfish or self-serving'
Honest and pure. Betrays the innocence we almost recapture when we find someone we adore, someone who makes this world worth living. I really like this.



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is touching. I like how the words flow and just made it well just simple and right to the point. Very well done.


Laura

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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I am 30 years old from the Ocean State Seeking to learn and share and have constructive, creative discourse with others who have opinions and ideas. I believe in a theory of evolution which is cente.. more..

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