Always the Struggle

since my last poems were dark do to that dark result I was trying to just write a love poem just an ode to love but he keeps texting me!!!

oh Love made me stay

maybe its love that makes you text those things you say

you will be with me here in my heart

though most of the days we stay apart

cause reality keeps bursting the bubble

why can't we be like that cozy long song

oh why is reality always the struggle

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

missing someone is indeed always the struggle. to be apart from your boo is not ideal, in fact, it jut plain sucks. and that feeling of frustration and annoyance is clearly expressed. yet there is beneath the text a feeling of gratitude -- being grateful you have someone so dear. and the rhymes carry that sentiment across the page, that while thereis suffering, there is joy too.

[butterfly]

Thanks for this review and coming by to read my poems. I truly appreciate it!