A More Valuable Cost

He hit me hard

he hit me soft

breaking my heart

had to much virus like a microsoft

we weren't compatible

I prefer apple

i thought he still could be the love of my life

but i was dumb he played me by the fake lights in his eyes

blinding me

it sucks to still be treated silly

i respected you

you didnt respect me

i wish you the best honestly

because unlke you I am not cruel

but the loneliness leaves one feeling not cool

hit me hard

hit me soft

taking pleasure in taking me apart

but realizing this mechanic couldnt fix it because we are not a car

where do i go now

all i see are these damn clouds

hitting me hard

hitting me soft

with this broken heart

why when i tried to love you

you just took me a part

instead of keeping us safe from harm

i search for that world

but so far the men and girls

just treat each other like a fake pearl

something to touch and toss

when hearts and love should be priced at a more valuable cost

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear poet.
"but so far the men and girls
just treat each other like a fake pearl
something to touch and toss
when hearts and love should be priced at a more valuable cost"
We learn too late. Love is the kindest and sweetest gift we can receive. Honest and worthwhile words and thoughts shared.
Coyote