Miss you

 All this trouble

 caused this struggle

 memories fly by as I stare into this puddle

 always wondering if I could find you if I used the Hubble

 but then reality pops that bubble

 it's been almost nine years since we spoke

 when you passed I was just left to choke

 and then the whole family broke

 fell apart, everything up in smoke

 you were the lock that kept us together

 to my grandmother who seems to be gone forever

 I just wish I could tell you I love you but I know you will always remember

 not a day goes by your memories don't play in my mind

 holding on to the thought that I'll see you in time.

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

Strong closing. Really strong closing.

Longing is an easy topic to sound like a cliched unoriginal a*s clown with. You avoided that for the most part. Well done.

You've got some skill my friend. I look forward to reading more of you.