sound poem

The sound of nothing just pure silence

a lost soul who died from violence

walking the after life alone with no guidance

not hearing the trumpets or violins

just blank darkness nothing ,not even smiling

You know you're there but can't see or hear

trying to scream but there's nothing to fear

can't hear his self puffing for air

because he is just gone and not really here.

Just something to post here I thought the contest was a cool Idea, I like reading everyone's work, people have fascinating stories and poems wishing the best for all......

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

mmmm this is good very interesting interpretation of death and the silence thereafter
not being able to scream was great. love your poem