I love you

Just a poem about a girl who is love with a guy but they're not together.

I love you.

Yes I said it.

What did you say?

You love me back.

You're seventeen,

A junior at the local highschool.

I'm fourteen,

A freshman at my house.

A three year difference

Isn't a long difference.

But when it comes

To my age and your age,

It sounds sinful.

But why would people have to know?

An affair?

Yes, I said affair.

An affair is sexual, you say

But not always.

We wouldn't have to call it an affair

If you don't like.

We could just call it love

Because that is what it is.

This is a love that could last a lifetime.

I love you,

You love me.

What else must we need?

We could runaway, you say.

And I agree.

Let's get your car

And leave this place.

We could succeed,

Or we could get caught.

But that's all right,

Our love will never rot.

I think I'm insane

Because I just wrote

A poem about us,

When there's not even an us.

I just wrote what I want the future to hold.

I just want about my love for you.

I just wrote about your love for me.

But I just wrote a total like.

I love you.

Yes, I said it.

Not to your face of course.

How could I do that?

You don't love me.

You never will

Because I am too scared

To tell you how I feel.

I will try to deny my feelings.

I will try to forget you.

But how can I do that?

I see you all the time.

So I'll hide my feelings

And never talk about it.

But you will go through my mind

Everyday for eternity.

Reviews

[Enigma]

WOW!! So romantic. I really liked it. Liked it a lot.
It flows so beautifully, conveying all of your thoughts and feelings to the reader.At one point, I wanted to get up and go and tell the guy about you...lol
I liked the idea and the possibilities you put up.At first you imagined him saying that he loved you too and got blown away with your own dreams. Later, you realise that you're too scared to tell him in face and so, decide not to ever tell him. But just for your sake, you write a poem about it, which in my point of view, is a great way of showing that you care.I've written a similar poem...lol
Great Write!! I'd love to read it again and again....lol

[Enigma]

WOW!! So romantic. I really liked it. Liked it a lot.
It flows so beautifully, conveying all of your thoughts and feelings to the reader.At one point, I wanted to get up and go and tell the guy about you...lol
I liked the idea and the possibilities you put up.At first you imagined him saying that he loved you too and got blown away with your own dreams. Later, you realise that you're too scared to tell him in face and so, decide not to ever tell him. But just for your sake, you write a poem about it, which in my point of view, is a great way of showing that you care.I've written a similar poem...lol
Great Write!! I'd love to read it again and again....lol