Memories Of You

Something old I had around.

Days go by,
and memories still haunt me,
Weeks go by,
living in the past sadly,
So why, oh why,
stay living so lonely,
Knowing that you,
live happily without me.

Life without you,
I live like a zombie,
remembering everyday we spent,
all the times you said "hold me,
but now it's all different,
no calls, no hellos,
no "baby I love you's",
no passion all night long,
I swear to God,
So hard to let you go,
trying to live,
while the feeling is still killing me slow.

So months go by,
and memories still haunt me,
So seasons come and go,
and still your shadow finds me,
So why, oh why,
can't I get away for once,
and why, oh why
can't I be at peace for once.

Reviews

[therisa]

It flow beautifully, in expressing your lost associated with the departure of a lover. As others have said, many can relate, having similar experiences in our lives.Hoping at the time, writing this poem eased the pain of a lover saying, "good-bye, forever", to you.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i agree, this is extremely good!

[sarah]

so sad but wonderful!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sad Poem! Flowed so beautifully and smoothly. Alot of people can relate to this poem! Great Job!

[Karli]

great flow, hits close to home. lately, this is exactly how I've been feeling. Great job!:)

[MissThomas]

Nice flow. Nice poem

[E.H. Monroe]

We're all just left out to die to someone, and a a treasure to someone else. Let's light a candle for memories of people we dont' wanna remember but can't forget.

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