May I have your attention please?

May I have your attention please?

A Poem by Dream Slave

Halo falls off of my head,
what can I say? I'm not a saint,
Just a sinner living my fate,
Since the day when we first met.

I didn't mean to, I apologize,
but just your eyes, had me mesmerized,
Hypnotized, in the way that if I looked away,
I feared I'd shrivel up and die.

So may I have your attention please?
I have something I must just say,
I ask you to take away this pain,
Never let it come again.

So may I have your attention please?
I have something I must plead,
Make me honest like the days,
When I still had my innocence.

© 2010 Dream Slave


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This is great!(: I agree with both of the reviews below!!!


Posted 14 Years Ago


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This was really good! =) I liked how it tells a story of someone who's been sucked up by the power of another and then left to die. It then flows into the realization that the past was better and they want to go back. Great write! xD

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Posted 14 Years Ago


this is so powerful! wonderful work!

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Dream Slave
Dream Slave

Cayey, Metro, Puerto Rico



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University Student looking for somewhere to blow off steam. I'm 22 and am figuring out the world may not be as small as some people say. more..

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A Poem by Dream Slave