Hollow Point Soul

Cold calculated thoughts,
From hello you had me caught,
Lying your way to the top,
Planting yet another crop.

Perforate and spread destruction,
Crash and damage the emotions,
Expand influential notions,
Your soul is a hollow point.

Impact which will never heal,
Don't know how to even feel,
Thoughts about what once was real,
What you came and raped and killed.

Perforate and spread destruction,
Crash and damage the emotions,
Expand detrimental notions,
Your soul is a hollow point.

Perforate and spread destruction,
Crash and damage the emotions,
Expand now rancorous notions,
My soul now's a hollow point.

Author's Note

Thoughts of all kind welcomed

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

I like the ideas behind this. You definitely get the vibes of someone corrupted and scorned. Bad. They want the person to know it, too. I think what made me really like this piece was the recurring phrases with slight changes in each stanza. The emotions behind each line were delivered great. i could feel the shifts in tone and mood.