Eternal Slave

Sat one day and thought, "what is the only thing that we can't defeat". The answer I had was time.

A rope tugging my neck,
dragged along the desert sands,
against its will I try to stand,
every second brings despair,
what was one day so clear,
enigmatic has become,
dreaming of the days of freedom,
that slowly turn into nightmares,
realizing once and for all,
the details of my fate,
in the sands of time I roam,
I am its eternal slave.

Reviews

[+Naomi+]

Woah, I will quote one of my old poems "Time is a f*****g pain in the a*s" and It's in this too, you're saying it in an awesome way. I loved this, so much.

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Way Cool! I totally agree with you! We are all slaves to the motions and machines of Grandfather Time. I loved this write! xD

Kisses - Ash

[the in between]

I agree, however at this moment I feel that time is very slow and tedious :) great write! keep writing of course.