drowning

You’re an ocean,

Deep and mysterious.

 

Gently flowing,

Brightly glowing.

 

Searching to find your treasure,

The deeper I go, I realize it may take forever.

 

So, dangerous

So, wild.

 

You caught me with one cast,

But that’s all the past.

 

I can’t keep swimming forever,

I’m about to drown.

 

Tired of the chase,

I found my place.

 

I go to shore,

I never found the treasures I was looking for.

 

Reviews

[Thepensiveplayer]

This makes a huge impact in the body, but especially in the mind. Sometimes it makes you wonder do we fool ourselves in finding something we've always had all along? Hmm, I think what you've always had was your talent for writing like this. I encourage you to keep going.

[KCthelastboyscout]

Beautifully written. Great metaphors describing your emotions.I love when you write what comes from inside of you

[RBrmdz]

I love the fact that you went to shore and didnt drown. Its shows strength or thats how i interpreted it. Keep writing and keep growing your vocab some of the best poets on here really show skill with word choice. Im working on that constantly

[Jason Baptiste]

Hi Skeletongirl Great writing More you writer better you'll become As a musician practice makes perfect for every thing in life Be strong and confident smile you're writing is beautiful Wishing you success beyond dreams and imagination