The Feeling

The clouds roll around me,

Inhaling the smoke.

 

call me an addict

but you don’t feel the pain

 

the tears dry up,

there is no despair.

 

Just light one up,

And you’re walking on air.

 

Reviews

[Jason Baptiste]

Yeah Short and filled with lots of realistic contents Very simply effective Love your creative capacity with very little That's amazing to achieve Keep on Truly enjoyed

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, when i used to smoke---there was that certain exhale that seemed to exhale some of the pain with each puff...
i really like this...

it's like inhaling good thoughts to offset the bad.

j.

[R.E. Ray]

Sounds like what I experience smoking a good cigar, and sipping Scotch. ;)

Live it, write it, share it!

[Thepensiveplayer]

Interesting. Its true we all need some form of recreation from time to time. As long as we don't over indulge in anything, I think we're fine. Nice poem and keep on writing!

[Kelli April]

Love it. Simple yet superb!

[CreatureKane]

This was amazing! I absolutely loved it!

[Karmee]

you write with imagery enjoyed this

[LukasNation]

WOW, beautiful, a talent you got there!

[Dreaming-Demon]

Everyone needs a form of escape. As long as it ain't hurting you or anyone ..screw it. Lol enjoyed this piece

[RBrmdz]

This. Love it. Short. Perfectly stated. The im high i dont care attitude comes across. I love love love this.