Ocean

This is one of my drafts. Derived from my memories in the summer.

Ocean 

Cold and blue 

Sending icy chills from your spine to your toes

Swimming in the ocean 

Is swimming in a pool of isolation 

Hundreds of feet from the bottom

Always impossible to touch no matter how fast you swim 

The ocean grabs you as you float on its rippling surface 

It pulls you with it 

In the direction of unknown 

Sinking your ears beneath the drowning current 

Time slows 

Your body blurs from your mind 

Your body slow but never completely still

The ocean fills your ears with the whistle of the unknown 

You can think it’s scattered words

Like a puzzle you can solve 

But no

That’s the music of the ocean

The music of the unknown 

Never meant to be solved 

Its the mysterious sounds in inner shells 

It’s the unknown sound of the fish singing 

It’s the question of the 95 percent that is still the “unknown” 

That’s the isolation of the ocean 

Grabbing your body and pulling it away 

Away from the maze of your life

Away from the weight of your mind 

Pulling you in all different directions

The direction of the ocean 

Is the direction of unknown 

Sending icy chills as a warning 

That your life is only temporary 

Until you step into the great blue  

 

Author's Note

Ignore the grammar
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