Life as we know it

I Take A Breath

 

And Breath In Air

 

Flowers In Bloom

 

And Blossomed Trees

 

People Walking

 

Laughing

 

Talking

 

Life Is Beautiful

 

Yet One Day We must Let Go

 

And Forget Life As We Know It

 

Beacuse It Doesn't Last Forever

 

 

Author's Note

I don't usually write poetry- in fact i never have
please tell me what you think

Reviews

[Sam Gregory]

Short, but what u said reached me, it speaks of beauty and the message is clear. Cling on to what u have for u are bound to lose it sooner if u don't. God work

[Kerri Hart]

Thank you very much,
You captured exactly what I wanted. That means a lot.
Your words are appreciated
~Kerri

[Dark Tower]

A nice short piece, its got a really nice feel to it. Well written K.J

[Kerri Hart]

thank you

[Pax]

Life Is Beautiful
Yet One Day We must Let Go
And Forget Life As We Know It
Beacuse It Doesn't Last Forever
~ well said!
~~i like it. beautiful!

[Kerri Hart]

thank u :)

[Owlgirl]

This is excellent, are you sure you never write poetry? Anyway, it's amazing! I love it!

[Kerri Hart]

thank u!

[Owlgirl]

your welcome :)

[Serenity Faith]

For someone who never writes poetry you do a good job of it. You should write poems more often ^_^

[Hope]

I like this poem it is well put together and tell truth.

[Kerri Hart]

thank u it means a lot :D

[Jon Settle]

Simply BEAUTIFUL, I really enjoy this poem. Glad you posted it. :)

[Kerri Hart]

so am i :P
thank you so much

[Jon Settle]

You're very welcome :)

[Forever Hidden]

This is really beautiful, stunning, amazing, I can't say anything more than that! You should enter this in a contest! =)

[Kerri Hart]

wow thank you

[Forever Hidden]

No problem!

[Skye]

I love your message in this, and you portray is very well. The only thing I would suggest is changing the third and forth line to something that flows more easily. Other then that, this is lovely. :)