End?

End?

A Poem by Canicus

The sun is drowning behind the mountains
The sky is lit up bright pink
Day time is gone, the chill night has begun
one ends, one starts, a fascinating link

It is said that after ever death there is life
but how will anyone really know?
the questions no living person can answer
because they've never seen the end of the show

One day the sun might supernova
destroyed planets is a possible outcome
will there be a new earth or sun
how will we know it'll even happen until the day has come?

Trends end, then new trends start
you see the pattern all around you
do things just happen like that or is that how it is meant to be?
is it always out with the old, and in with the new?

Who says there has to be night after day, and day after night?
will there ever be a real end?
are things suppose to go in cycles?
is it true that there is a beginning to every end?

© 2012 Canicus


Author's Note

Canicus
Ignore any mistakes
This is different than my usual material, but oh well.
I want to hear your answers to that final question, there is no right or wrong answer it's what you believe. (Please do not start an argument.)

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I love this part, the thought here is really nice:
"Day time is gone, the chill night has begun
one ends, one starts, a fascinating link

It is said that after ever death there is life
but how will anyone really know?"

As for your authors notes, (and ignoring mistakes) to answer your question, hmm... perhaps not every end, but many stories do have a end. Interesting topic, and poem; it's a thought thinking one with a meaning and interesting way of thinking about things into the lines you have written here.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I do believe there's an end. Because God made the beginning and going to have it all come to an end too. It's in the book of Revelations :) Great book to me. Interesting and exciting.
But these are some interesting questions to ponder to yourself and ask your readers. It's quite different than most of your writing, but it's amazing though :) indeed. Keep up the good work, Joshua!


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


really good nice job ^__^

Posted 12 Years Ago



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