My beautiful sunflower

The hail is pouring faster

the fog is getting thicker

everything is getting destroyed

not much more is left

It's getting harder to see

things are becoming blurry

the air is moist

with the feeling of nothingness

I see something

out in the distance

slowly being pulled towards it

standing above it I'm astonished

I pick it up without hesitation

in my hands I hold

my beautiful sunflower

shining bright with her yellow petals

Each petal represents

a great quality of hers

the sunflower with one million petals

she's so amazing

Author's Note

Sorry it doesn't rhyme, and it may seem all over the place, but I'm trying to get back into writing.
enjoy.

Reviews

[BrynnaW.]

I agree with all of the reviews. That was very beautiful and I'm glad you sent me an RR for it. A perfect take on a sunflower that I thought was very unique. Well done! :)

[Angelic Surrender]

I really liked it. It didn't need to rhyme. Great work :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This was so beautiful.
And you'll always be a great writer :)

[Tasha]

this is so beautiful and sweet
i agree with krimson
wonderful write :)

[Krimson]

this my dear is way too cute ^^
i can tell youre deep, and loving, and im sure with the flick of a fewwords youd have a girl blushing in a instant(:
i really like it , its different and kind