Own My Heart

You were able to

sneak your way into

this beaten life of mine

and I thought it was too good to be true

But you stole my heart

filled it with the happiness
that only you could make me feel

you saved me from the darkness

It's not completely gone

but you're willing to be my heroine

in this ever lasting battle

no matter what, I know you're the one

you did what I thought

... was impossible

as long as you keep trying

baby, you're unstoppable

I'll always be yours

my love for you stretches to infinity

you own my heart

always, forever, and eternity

Author's Note

It's the first time I've written in a while (sorry), so it's probably not as good as the writings before this. enjoy.

Reviews

[Sarah]

It's as good as all of them. It flows and tells a story of its own.

[Que]

This is really cute :) It has a musicality to it - ever thought of making it into a song?
Cheers!

[Krimson]

this is soooo freakin cute, its just too cute and the words are spoken just rigt. i really like it its simple yet deep, well thoughted out, caring and loving words.

[XxKilljoy4verxX]

cute :D

[AJ Kristiansen]

I love it Joshua, it's fabulous! And I know you write songs and I can hear it being belted out on your guitar... or sung in a soft way looking straight into her eyes :) Glad she's still with you and shining light into your soul :) Well done and keep up the great work!

[Day Dreamer]

It's wonderful. Very wonderfully written, great structure, and a beautiful meaning behind it.

[EvilAngel]

honest and heartfelt. great write:)

[ducky(:]

its really sweet and sorta understanding, i like it

[tk]

this is definitely something new from you, Joshua.
not as good as the writing before this?? you've got to be kidding me! :)
i love reading this piece very much! it's something sweet and passionate. the words flow simply, yet the emotions are outpouring.
i especially liked the last stanza:
"I'll always be yours
my love for you stretches to infinity
you own my heart
always, forever, and eternity"
those are the words i would love to hear from HIM..

[Seanne Tholltree]

wow...it's so sweet of you!!