Two hands

Two hands holding my heart

both just stole it

I couldn't stop either one

between two my heart is split

 

One, the hand of my beautiful maiden

so soft, loving, and tender

I love her more than words can say

to her I can't help but to surrender

 

The other not so kind

digging it's nails inside, wanting to cause me pain

the dark princess I can not stop

my darkest fear it can obtain

 

One leads to a life full of

laughter, happiness, and affection

the other has horrid things awaiting

hatered, despair, maybe even screaming at my own reflection

 

Two hands hold my heart

one of the sick, twisted darkness

the other of my love, my life, my world

this life is going to  be a battle none the less

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Alana McGuire]

This is really neat. I enjoy the comparisons between the love of your life, and all things that taunt and toil with your happiness. Your descriptions are very well written and the poem had me drawn in from the beginning and I didn't lose interest at any point. :)

[Sarah]

realy nice i realy liked it...

[natzky]

really awesome',, choose the one that makes you happy'...heheh..double like..:)

[alley]

What a beautiful poem i love it.

[DearSweetAgony]

Very deep poem, I can tell that you meant every word. Awesome write as always!

[CHRIS ANDES]

it sucks to my heart!!..great!

[Seanne Tholltree]

good flow...

The other not so kind

digging it's nails inside, wanting to cause me pain

the dark princess I can not stop

my darkest fear it can obtain



One leads to a life full of

laughter, happiness, and affection

the other has horrid things awaiting

hatered, despair, maybe even screaming at my own reflection

[ducky(:]

i love this!

[WinterIce<3]

AWESOME! :) LOVE it

[Roxi L]

A very fluid flow. I loved this!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~