Am I worthy?

A queen, a goddess, a flawless perfection

she is...not just that, but more

a beautiful spring flower, luminous moon in the night

such a lovely maiden I adore

 

never have I met anyone like her

so sweet, cute, caring, compasionate, and lovely

she's truely one of a kind, a special girl

and she is mine, how'd I get so lucky

 

everything a guy could want, and so much more

she doesn't just stop at perfection, no

she takes it to the stars, way beyond

with intense natural beauty, she does glow

 

A fool, a mere mortal, an embarrassing fail

I am... nothing compared to her

an unbarable rotted tree, a dark grey cloud in the sky

next to something so bright, I'm just a blur

 

sometimes I sit and think to myself

why would a girl like you want pitiful me

there are tons of better choices out there

but you decided to set this heart free

 

you are so amazing, so beautiful, you can't be described by words

nor pictures, because nothing can capture such beauty of yours

one thought runs through my mind

I try to keep it behind closed doors

but Am I worthy?

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Day Dreamer]

Wonderful Joshua. Well done. Keep writing! :)

[Justin Thorne]

Nice Job, xD

[Bridgette's Ink]

ONE WORD: A-dor-a-ble. I'm not for mushy, lovey-dovey stuff but this was cute.

[Forgotten]

i liked it alot

[Que]

Very good, I really like it.
There are some mistakes though (just distraction ones, dw) for example you wrote "set" instead of I suppose "sit" in the verse "sometimes I sit and think to myself".
Cheers and have a good day :)

[HeIsWe]

This is amazing, its really cute and sweet!!!!!!

[Lynn]

So cool! true luv shows. nice job! XD

[BlueDreams]

Nice rhyme flow and great write :-)