Am I worthy?

A queen, a goddess, a flawless perfection

she is...not just that, but more

a beautiful spring flower, luminous moon in the night

such a lovely maiden I adore

 

never have I met anyone like her

so sweet, cute, caring, compasionate, and lovely

she's truely one of a kind, a special girl

and she is mine, how'd I get so lucky

 

everything a guy could want, and so much more

she doesn't just stop at perfection, no

she takes it to the stars, way beyond

with intense natural beauty, she does glow

 

A fool, a mere mortal, an embarrassing fail

I am... nothing compared to her

an unbarable rotted tree, a dark grey cloud in the sky

next to something so bright, I'm just a blur

 

sometimes I sit and think to myself

why would a girl like you want pitiful me

there are tons of better choices out there

but you decided to set this heart free

 

you are so amazing, so beautiful, you can't be described by words

nor pictures, because nothing can capture such beauty of yours

one thought runs through my mind

I try to keep it behind closed doors

but Am I worthy?

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[SUGATA M]

Of course you are worthy eternal lover

[natzky]

wow, this is really great...this poem is one of my favorite....keep on writing..:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very sweet and tender poem. Well inked!!!

[Hannah Is My Name Sadly]

Very sweet, I like it she's very lucky to have you.

[Desmund Tiny]

A wonderful piece.... you're worthy just believe in yourself..... you expressed yourself wonderfully in this poem.... nice.... ^^,

[Sarah]

really good, i loved it

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this was a beautiful piece on how someone can be so perfect in your eyes but you wonder why you... you expressed yourself wonderfully and i love this piece

[DearSweetAgony]

Wow, this poem made me feel like a was reading someones diary...I was Enthralled, astonished, and afterwards guilty. I liked your metaphor about the tree and the clouds, I thoughts those were carelessly thrown in. In which making it seem more like an entree in a diary than a poem....But, I say this with good intentions. Great Job, I really liked this write!

[AJ Kristiansen]

Wow Josh! Absolutely amazing!! You've hit the ceiling with this one!! Very articulate and really love your heart coming through with how you feel about her and the multiple images of flowers, stars and rotten tree trunks! Great work Josh! Well done!

[ducky(:]

good and very understanding.