Music

Music

A Poem by Canicus

The beat of the drums

just like the beating of my heart

everyboom and crash

letting me just... restart

 

the strumming of the guitar

one chord after another

put into perfect melody

holds me together

 

the lyrics from the singers mouth

just flows from the soul

makes me get lost in the song

making me lose control

 

it's heart, it's soul, it's life

music is more than just sound

music is a part of everyone

it makes the world go 'round

 

sound flowing to my heart

from my ears

music

helps me wipe awaymy tears

express myself

and face all of my fears.

© 2011 Canicus


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Well said Joshua, all very true. A lot of depth in this and where would we be without music? It's a salve for soul it really is... makes life worth living and helps us keep going. It also gives a voice to things deep inside that often we can't find the words for... keep writing! I like the your sentiments expressed here!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very nicely said indeed, I love this about music. It is awesome in that way... and this write of yours is also very awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You've put together everyone's opinions on music perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can relate 100% to this. Music does all of those things to me and more. Loved it

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

Posted 12 Years Ago


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wow it's really awesome, every word comes from your heart...certified music lover...harhar:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow i liked it alot

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved it!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written! Music has always been my 'escape' from the unfortunate events of my boring life. You've portrayed just how sweet that 'escape' is best here. Your poem is of true feelings that I believe that everyone has felt before. (Well, I know I have) :D
Great job, I enjoyed reading!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I loved it, I found the last stanza especially great :)
Cheers and great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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it is realy good, i loved it....

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