Forever

As soon as I hold you

I will never want to let go

just wrap you in my arms

wanting time to go slow

 

You're amazing to me

you're everything and more

I love you with all my heart

you're all I could ever ask for

 

I want to fall asleep

by your side

and wake to see your smiling face

making me feel whole inside

 

I want our lips to meet

in the moonlit night

as the stars are over us

and I'm holding you tight

 

yearning for you

wanting to be together

hoping we'll be

together forever

Author's Note

your thoughts?

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

A lovely romantic poem. The yearning is apparent and you penned the emotion quite good. thanks for sharing.

[jennifer little]

good work keep up the good work nice write

[Archia]

The 'together forever' idea I normally think is kind of corny. But this wasn't corny at all in context, it was wonderful. This was a beautiful poem, and I really enjoyed it for that. And I thought the last line really added to it (instead of sounding corny).

[Amila Jay]

A wonderful write:)

[Angelic Surrender]

So beautiful and lovely. Great flow. Awesome poem. Wish someone felt like this about me.

[Vinyl Affair]

Lovely, beautiful, compelling! It's very 'fluffy' like a one shot, I see this in the point of view through a young man who loves a woman but she doesn't seem to want the same as him, close friends, they has a mishap once and kissed and now he's realising he loves her. I see it as that, however, I am sure that is not how you intended it to be. I guess, everyone just see's things differently.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

My thoughts... this is very very nice. Lovely, sweet... that feeling of wanting to be with someone near them, and just be with them, you wrote that well in this.

[alley]

That was a goregous poem to me.

[musicfollowsme213000]

Wow excellent very romantic

[Krystyna Herst]

I really enjoyed this poem. I could feel the emotion in it. Keep on writing :DDD