The Person Inside

People just don't understand

they don't see what's behind my eyes

all the pain, all the misery

caused by all of life's lies

 

They think I have

nothing causing me to stress out

but there are many things

that no one knows about

 

Sometimes I

just can't handle it

I feel like crying my eyes out

then drowning myself in the tear-filled pit

 

My life is not all rainbows

like everyone thinks

it's far from it

and gets darker with ever blink

 

The person inside of me

is not a happy one

he is full of stress and sorrow

sometimes just wishing to be done

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[ducky(:]

i like it its amazing and very understanding!

[Lynn]

This is good. I feel like this sometimes too.

[HeIsWe]

I like its really good!!!

[Sarah]

wonderfull poem. it is amazing. nice write.

[Lexy]

Well put Joshua. message me please

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Painfully rereted and poised for perfection, well worded and plowed greatly, well done, good read.