If it weren't for you

Darkness was consuming me

and trapping my heart

getting me ready

to fall apart

 

Killing all hope

making me want to give in

I thought I was helpless

I didn't think I could win

 

but you came into my life

and lit a fire bright

which scared the darkness

amazed at such a sight

 

you are my world

my life, my everything

I'm lucky to have you

for you I'd do anything

 

If it wasn't for you

I might not be here right now

you saved me

somehow...

Author's Note

your thoughts

Reviews

[Your Perfect Disaster]

Interesting poem. Interesting indeed.

[Lexy]

Awesome.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i love this poem..it was beautifully written...and wonderfully expressed

[Kalika]

Awemazing!!

[Jennifer]

So sweet, keep up ur writings :)

[Lynn]

Awesomeness. Many people think that when their world is falling apart. They are suddenly saved by an amazing person. thumbs up!

[Sarah]

it is so nice.
A lovely choise of words. lovely work.

[Serena Tan]

So beautiful!!!!!
I really love this poem!
Very sweet ><
I give you 100!

[light and ashes]

Beautiful and phenomenal poem, every stanza perfection. You get a 100 from me on this.