If it weren't for you

Darkness was consuming me

and trapping my heart

getting me ready

to fall apart

 

Killing all hope

making me want to give in

I thought I was helpless

I didn't think I could win

 

but you came into my life

and lit a fire bright

which scared the darkness

amazed at such a sight

 

you are my world

my life, my everything

I'm lucky to have you

for you I'd do anything

 

If it wasn't for you

I might not be here right now

you saved me

somehow...

Author's Note

your thoughts

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

My thoughts... it is really amazing at how things, or certain people can save someone; perhaps without the person even knowing they did save you and the troubles of a time where your down. I really like the way you wrote the deep hopeless emotions and turned it over into a light of hope and being saved.

[Rachel]

wow, jus beautiful. this is great.

[Archia]

I loved the ending it was wonderful how it rhymed. Well the whole thing was wonderful with the rhyme, none of it seemed forced, but the end was especially good.

[Broken Wings]

You must absolutely love your girl :) haha this is really good :))

[AJ Kristiansen]

Beautiful Joshua, very beautiful! The internal struggles we all have in attempting to handle our despair and not always knowing how to or if we can. Love this poem, a wonderful mixture of conveying your darkness and then the hope that came into your life :) Well done!

[natzky]

at the age of 15 this poem is really awesome.... .you're so lucky of having that someone...heheh

[Desmund Tiny]

This poem is great, very sweet.... I can feel a love flowing in each words..... nice piece.

[Day Dreamer]

My thoughts? Amazing poem. My opinion of this poem? Wonderfully written. Keep writing! :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautifully written.

[ducky(:]

thats so sweet i like your writings