My Own Misery

I thought you were the one...

the one who could pull me from the dark

but I was wrong about you

although you did leave a big mark

 

you started to save me

I thought you were actually aiding

but you just pushed me in further

and watched as I started fading

 

I guess happiness isn't meant for me

and I have to live in agony

might as well stop trying

I'm never going to be free

 

it's all just a game

picking me up then dropping me

flat on my face

not even putting me down carefully

 

I'm not meant to have love

not meant to be happy

no real smiles for me

just to set in my own misery

Author's Note

how is it?

Reviews

[Day Dreamer]

Wow.... wonderful, bud. Keep writing! :)

[DearSweetAgony]

Very well written, and it lives up to its titles boasts. I really liked reading this, keep up the great work!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very nicely penned. Good work.

[Writing with Kae]

i like it,very well described

[Your Perfect Disaster]

This is very good. I've felt like that a majority of my life.
Good job, i can really sense the hurt and pain in this work.

[Que]

Very heartfelt, great job.

[Justin Thorne]

Really Good

[Sarah]

this was realy good. keep writing

[HeIsWe]

This is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Casper]

It is good. Definitely lets the reader know that you feel at loss with yourself. I am most familiar with this feeling.
Very good right. I hope you feel better soon :)
- Sarah