Welcome back

This is the sequel to "Circus"

Welcome back
I see you liked the last show
you're in for a real treat this time
for this your mind will blow
everything is set up
to cause the boy more pain
so get ready to watch
as he goes insane
life is getting harder on him
as he has nothing to lose, yet no way to gain
for the opening act
he falls deeper into
this pit of darkness and tears
for now there is nothing he can do
not being able to do anything anymore
nothing he was told was true
people say they care
but when he needs it most he has no one to turn to
next the light shines on him
as he slowly fades away
never to be seen again
nothing to keep him here anyway
he's almost gone
this game he no longer wants to play
so why should he
about this theres not much more to say
I will show you to the third act
as he gets lost,he can't see
he is now hopeless
forever blind he shall be
won't find his way out
no way he will ever be free
he's trapped here forever
no matter how much I see him plea
I thank you for coming
hope you enjoyed his helpless screams
as we had fun causing them
have a nice day

Author's Note

what do you think of this one?
which one do you like better this or "Circus"?

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

I really really liked this poem. I will have to read circus now!

[DearSweetAgony]

I really enjoyed reading this one, but nothing I wouldn't expect from you.

[Bridgette's Ink]

wow! another really good one, so hard to pick because i loved them both. this one had an eerie way about it and intrigued me more but i loved both. im putting this in my favorites.

[Roxi L]

I like this better. Its very haunting and this kind of scared me! I loved it

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[Your Perfect Disaster]

I think I liked "Circus" better, but this one is also an extremely well job.
So many true emotions shine out and hard points in life can be easily picked at.

Great job my friend~ (:

[HeIsWe]

I think this is really good but I like circus better, probably because I read that one first.