circus

Welcome to the circus

of darkness and despair

the first act, a boy

always treated unfair

you'll enjoy this one

as you watch his heart tear

and he realizes

no one will ever care

for the second act

you watch as he goes through hell

it gets worse everyday

as you can probably tell

no hope for him

but I guess ohh well

last but not least

watch as stress takes it's toll

ripping him apart, piece by piece

slowly tearing away his soul

bringing you great joy

knowing he will never be whole

never, ever

again...

Author's Note

your thoughts?

Reviews

[Archia]

Ohhhh, this would have to be my favourite poem of all of yours. It was so sad, and the idea of it being a circus, tragic.

[katyj]

powerful and deep, enjoyed

[Krista]

Awesome Job.. I know how that feels

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

holy f**k! awsome poem

[joshua deathdealer]

ha I love this one. I like the imagery of the boy sitting as darkness and despair tears the him apart. Nice work.

[Justin Thorne]

I can really relate to this.

[Ciara]

that wuz rlly good

[Sarah]

amazing, very very good. you are a brilient writer

[DearSweetAgony]

This write is very, very sad but very good too. On the 14th line you wrote "Bu" instead of "But" but that was a very small imperfection in this write. I applaud your rhyming scheme in this write, it didn't seem as if it strayed once. Great write I enjoyed reading.

[Your Perfect Disaster]

This is pretty great. Full of sadness but yet somewhere there seems to be a hidden truth.
~Keep it up~