Pointless

I slipped and now I'm falling

I'm falling deep into my own demise

I see them watching not lifting a finger to help

they just watch me fall, the millions of eyes

 

it's like I'm not important

they say "he's stupid, can't do anything, useless."

maybe it's true that I'm just a waste of space

I'm just one big mess

 

should I even try to fight back anymore

it's pointless, they always return stronger than before

it's ripping me, tearing me, cutting me apart

my mind, lost; my heart, sore

 

theres nothing I can do to stop it

it always works it's way back

can't keep it out

pierced my heart like a tac

 

it's useless, pointless

sometimes I just feel like giving in

giving up letting go of everything

there's no way I can win

Author's Note

what are your thoughts

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Love the title. I like the rhyming you did, especially with "demise" and "eyes" in the first stanza. I really like the third stanza, and this part here:
"pierced my heart like a tac"
Very nice emotional write.

[natzky]

I experienced that too, anyway nice piece...heheh..full of emotions...

[Lee Gupperton]

Wow. That really hit me. I love it.

[Day Dreamer]

My thoughts, hmm? You wouldn't want to know that. It consists on rainbows and unicorns. Lol, just kidding. I loved this poem. Keep writing! :)

[ClosedEyesOpen]

never give up.......another great write

[Roxi L]

Ahh NEVER GIVE UP D****T!!!!!!!! ALWAYS FIGHT...NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU THINK YOUR GOING TO LOSE KEEP FIGHTING (So my theripist tells meh!)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know im always here if you need to talk.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[Becky C Strukamp]

There is always a way one can win. It's called determination and never giving up. Your poem so relates to the feelings of many which is sad, there is always something to feel good about. Saying that, I have felt exactly like this poem, but, no matter the defeats, I always strive for victories, even though they may be a struggle. It's worth it. We are all worth it. Great poem.
Thanks for writing and sharing your work.