Tears

Slowly I fall down

into this pit of darkness and despair

Starting to think I'm helpless, hopeless

why is this happening, it's not fair

 

Slowly I spiral

into the point of no return

where I'll be stuck the rest of my life

into my mind, body, and soul this feel will burn

 

no way to escape, no turning back

do I deserve this is it my fault?

it came quick, but the effects will last forever

kind of like what happens when struck by a lightning bolt

 

I'm so lost, and confused

ius there a way to relieve this pain?

will it be there forever?

will it leave a stain?

 

will there be something to protect me when I hit rock bottom

or will there be no hope, just let him go no one cares

just sit there watch, point, laugh, and stare

while the pain, right through me it tears

Author's Note

what are your thoughts

Reviews

[Bridgette's Ink]

I feel this way right now. You've captured the feeling of hopelessness very well.I feel this way right now. You've captured the feeling of hopelessness very well.

[Bridgette's Ink]

This is how i feel right now, you captured it well.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

My first thougt is, that's it's extremly hard to read, the balck bachround and grey wording, makes it almost impossible to get to the actually quite remarakble wording.