On your side

song I wrote please check it out

Goliath, a strong mighty warrior

withe sword, shield, and bow

came acros David

his strongest foe

 

David told him

I don't care what weapon you use

God is on my side

there's no way I can lose

 

he grabbed five smooth

stones out of the brook

fired them at Goliath

he fell and the earth shook

 

(chorus 1)

David knew

that as long as God was with him

he could do anything

he was in Gods army nothing could defeat them

 

anythings possible

just let god into your life

just let god into your life

just let god into your life

just let god into your life

 

(chorus 2)

God will be there for you

just let him lead the way

let him light the path

showing you into a new day

 

(chorus 1)

David knew

that as long as god was with him

he could do anything

he was in gods army nothing could defeat them

 

God will always be there for you

Author's Note

A church song, this is from a non-christian. what do you think?

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

well, a heart whelming song whether christian song or not
=]

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I enjoyed. Good writing. I am also a non-christian. Your writings are good.
I used to write poems for all the religions. Worshipping God always pave the way for peaceful world. With regards Joshua.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good. I'm a Jehovah's Witness..I am a Christian. Good write.

[Sarah]

realy good ( I'm not christian either), lovely...

[Day Dreamer]

As a Christian, such as myself :3, I love it. It makes it even better to know a non-Christian wrote this. Keep writing! :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well as a non-christian I would say you are very learned in my religion, well penned.

[Roxi L]

Im not a christian eaither, nor am I cathlic so I can't say anything about the theme, but it was nice from what I know about the religion.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[Becky C Strukamp]

I think you did an amazing write here. Penned beautifully.
Very enjoyable and uplifting poem. I loved it.

[Jane Doe]

I adore it!!:)
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He is we- Christian and if you need moree you know how to contact meh tt!!:)
Xoxoxo
~abbie
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