Make the world go 'round

You should really be carful

about who you pester

don't make them into a fool

or make them your court jester

 

just because we aren't like you

you cal us freaks and wierdos

but in the future

we could be your heros

 

does it make you feel good about yourself

to bring other people down

make their day horrid

make them into a clown

 

one day the tables will turn

some will be cold as ice

some will be forgiving

but when it's all over you'll wish you were nice

 

us, the ones you call

wierdos and freaks

yeah we make the world go 'round

watch someday you'll be bossed around by geeks

Author's Note

inspired by the poem "Sweet Music To My Ears" by Maria Whitlock
what do you think

Reviews

[ericdeben]

The concept is alright, but it looks like it was written by a high school freshman. No offense.
Suggestions:
Spell correctly
Avoid overused words
Think of what will rhyme, don't resort to the first word you think of.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most fuctional and replenshid insight into the unjust and revealed instance of others, well done, good read.