Invincible

I wrote this for my girlfriends birthday

you are my everything every thought in my mind every breath I breathe why were you so hard to find   you're all I will ever need all I'll ever want with you my happyness is guaranteed   I want to spen my life with you baby, there's nothing I'd rather do   (chorus) next to you I feel invincible there's nothing I can't do anything's possible   you're on my mind all the time I can't go a day without thinking about you no matter what happens to me my heart you subdue   you are the other piece to my heart you shine like a star you are the brightest part   everything about you is amazing every time we speak my heart starts racing   (chorus) next to you I feel invincible there's nothing I can't do anythings possible   I won't ever let you go keep you by my side I'll stay with you until that very last tear is cried   I'll love you until the end of forever keep you close you are my treasure   you are everything to me forever in your heart is where I want to be   (chorus) next to you I feel invincible there's nothing I can't do anything's possible   you make me invincible...

Author's Note

I don't think it's that good but what do you think?

Reviews

[TJ]

Beautiful! She will certainly love this!

[Tasha]

You are an invincible writer. This was a beautiful song, she will love it.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Slight and caved within the morality of feeling, well penned, great read.

[Becky C Strukamp]

You composed a very tender song here. I love it. Your talent extends beyond your years. Excellent, excellent. I Loved it.

[Roxi L]

Really good. I could never write a song. So I applaud anyone who can. Very Powerful. Great job.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~