Lies

I wrote this after watching a show about cyberbullying

You pushed me into

my own personal pit of pain and agony

it's really dark in here

and every one just sets and laughs at me

 

everyday the whole gets deeper

and deeper until

it gets unbearable

it's like no one knows how I feel

 

at times it fills with water

the water coming from my eyes

but maybe if it gets to deep

I won't hear all of the lies

 

calling me names

say things that aren't true

what did I do

what harm did I cause to you

 

my close friends

and even my family

are doing it

why are you all so cruel to me

 

my family started it

my friends made it worse

my life's ruined

layed upon it,a curse

Author's Note

comments please

Reviews

[Sarah]

Realy good and very powerful

[HeIsWe]

I watched this movie last night. I really like this poem

[Writing with Kae]

I think I know what movie you are mentioning....this is a good write

[Tasha]

This was powerful and heart-wrenching. People that are cyber bullies are mean and have their own problems. Excellent poem though.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Day Dreamer]

Wow....that's harsh. Not your work, but what these people are doing. This happens WAY to often to many people...not including myself. Look at it this way, if this ever happens to you, I'll be there for ya bud. :) Well written, my friend. Keep writing! :)

[Roxi L]

My favorite lines:

my family started it
my friends made it worse
my life's ruined
layed upon it,a curse

Writing keeps the dream alive
V

[Becky C Strukamp]

A very powerful heart wrenching poem. You penned well the emotions of pain and hurt. An excellent write. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing it and sharing.