Better

You're more than amazing
everything you do
put's a smile on my face
with that my hopes renew

completely terrific
I never want you to change
I love you just the way you are

my sunshine
always making my day brighter
lifting my pain
making my stress lighter

I don't think words
can even describe how wonderful you are
but I can try to write it down

I once thought you were perfect
now I realise I was wrong
perfect is something you've past
you've been better than it all along

Author's Note

what are your alls thoughts

Reviews

[Steph K]

"I don't think words can even describe how wonderful you are but I can try to write it down" I like how there is a quirky sort of feel in this part of the poem but you have maintained the overall seriousness and penned your emotions well. Its simple but runs deep. Beautiful piece!

[BlindedMinded]

an amaxing peice. Someone my age to be so insightful is wonderful amazing. :)

[Day Dreamer]

Wonderful, my friend! Keep writing! :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

another tender love poem from an amazing artist.

[donny ingraham]

sweet

[Lee Gupperton]

This is incredibly sweet and very cute.
You love someone, don't you?
Keep this up! You're great at writing.

[Roxi L]

Really sweet.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[nevershoutnever.]

Aw! If i was her, I'd totally feel like... awww ;)

[Tasha]

Aww it was really sweet.
♥ Ta'Shandra