blew me away

Poem about love pretaining to air

Love is blowing me
like a gentle breeze
making me dance
like when it catches in the trees

strong winds from you
sweep me off my feet
my heart becomes light
and I fly right out of my seat

soft gusts gently push me
moving us closer together
I am flowing with it
and hopefully someday we'll hold each other

mighty winds spin me like a wind mill
making me crazy for you
spinning around in circles
it will lead me to my love so true

gently it pushes my heart towards you
and I follow along
floating in the winds you created
that just blew me away

Reviews

[Sarah]

Its beautiful. Realy good

[Day Dreamer]

This was beautiful, very, very well written. Loved it! Keep writing! :)

[Tasha]

This was beautiful.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Becky C Strukamp]

such a beautiful love poem. I liked it a lot.

[alexis]

you write about love a lot.who do you love?

[Roxi L]

Some lines are from diffent movies and poems, but it was good. The ryhming really sets the mood.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi/V~

[donny ingraham]

your poem is good but some of your lines I heard before in movies and other poems